1rst comment on friends blog

The first blog that I decided to comment on is from my friend and classmate Chris. There are multiple blogs that he as has put out on blogger.com, but the one that I wanted to comment on was the blog about his “fixing papers”. This blog was all about how Chris and I helped each other fix our papers that we had to write for English class. He wrote the process we used to fix our papers up to what we believed were presentable. After writing our papers the day before we went into class prepared to revise for the first time. The thing that I most needed to work on was making my paper longer, much longer actually. And the thing Chris wanted to work on was fixing small things such as repeating words. In class we joined up into groups and took turns passing around our papers in the group and reading them out loud so we could actually hear the problems that we faced. And when we were done reading them all and discussing them we were supposed to pick out one question that we had about our papers and then when we went to the writing center to revise our final draft with a tutor we would have to present the question you came up with and make that your main point of focus. My question was “How do I make my paper longer?” Chris’s question was “How do I make my paper flow more?” Chris ends his blog by hoping that we did good on our papers and get good grades on them